Our assignment was to write such a love poem - possibly from the point of view of a particular character or figure we know.
This was also a "wild word" poem. My wild word was nuzzled. All I could see in my mind's eye when I pulled that word was a man, romantically nuzzling his date's neck - only to choke because her long hair got caught in his mouth.
For some reason, with the instructions and the mental image my word conjured, all I could think of was what Mr. Bean might do on a date.
This poem is the result.
A Night To Remember
He planned a night to remember…
To fan the flames of desire.
To heighten the senses.
Alone.
Starting to smoke.
Pesky allergies, you know.
Only to choke on her hair.
Dinner for two, picnic-style,
In front of a fireTo fan the flames of desire.
Dessert for two,
Rich, sweet, creamyTo heighten the senses.
Romantic movie on TV,
Sitting together in the darkAlone.
He planned a night to remember…
Feet tangling in the blanket
Moved too close to the flames,Starting to smoke.
Strawberry mousse with cream
Remaining untouched –Pesky allergies, you know.
Video broken – scratched and warped
Nuzzling her neck,Only to choke on her hair.
It was a night to remember.
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